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Distance creates delicacy

March 11, 2024 by BHW

Three thin communication towers flash red or white

latticed, reminiscent of Eiffel’s wind-resistant core

taper to the size of a needle, thumb’s distance away

elegant sky skewers on the horizon.

Alongside, walking past brutish base, ominous,

cold gray steel, each spans a city block, fenced by

wire barbed and coiled, close to houses

and an elementary school, impenetrably hard

impervious to living creatures at its feet, those

encased in semipermeable membranes whose minds

wander through emissions and waves.

Distance, through miles or decades, creates delicacy

absent in the here and now, the low hum of traffic,

voices raised that obliterate all thought.

Time like a cataract clouds what was once aglow

with clarity, blurs the expression on faces, keeps

us in at night, book closed on our laps, words lost

rechristens us as erasure poem, radically distilled,

nestled between towering lines once resistant

to wind, blacked out, illegible.

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