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Just for a moment

June 15, 2022 by BHW

I am the comma, the tiniest of endings

between the known and something more.

I ask you to pause, imagine saving you

from the chaos of rushing with pride,

piety, into confusion. I invite you

to breathe, knowing you are about to

float away, toward the independent clause

phrased in another’s hand.

A momentary connector, vapor vanishing,

whisked aside. I leave no trace. Already

you are on to the next, hurtling toward your full

stop. Moment passed, I remain, head bowed,

hanging between two wisps of time, here

on this page, once held in your hands, in your

gaze, waiting for you to read me. Again.

Posted in Leaving, Writing | 4 Comments

4 Responses

  1. on June 16, 2022 at 4:06 am JJ Avinger-Jacques

    Ta Da!! Wonderful, fun!! ❤️


    • on June 21, 2022 at 8:34 pm BHW

      Besos!


  2. on June 21, 2022 at 4:38 pm Jorge

    perfect for my time of day….thanks B…


    • on June 21, 2022 at 8:38 pm BHW

      me alegra escucharlo



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