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Palpable

September 18, 2021 by BHW

Three fingers on my right wrist, you listen

to the rhythm of my blood river, its constant

flow no one else hears. If you placed your

fingertips to my forehead, would you feel

my shame? Would your palm over my heart

read my longing? Could your hand on my

left hip, fingers pressing deeply into knotted

loins, knead open their gate?

You reach behind the smooth surface

of not caring, the falseness of bravado,

unmask me with your silence.

Posted in Longing, Solitude, Surrender | 4 Comments

4 Responses

  1. on September 19, 2021 at 8:18 am Lyn

    Bonnie, I love this one. Wow.


    • on September 19, 2021 at 8:31 am BWH

      Thank you – Felt good to put words on a page(!)


  2. on September 19, 2021 at 11:01 am manuela

    So much in so few lines! Thanks for that. I especially like the ending, he, he!


    • on September 19, 2021 at 1:10 pm BHW

      Yes, this ending is better than what I had yesterday! Thank you!



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