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Voyeur

December 7, 2019 by BHW

Lovers kiss on the corner of Dueñas y Doña Maria Coronel

oblivious to the upended maroon sofa and overfull trash bins

awaiting pick up in the morning

the toddler whining in futile defiance

his parents scolding and hurrying him along

a young girl twirls wide circles from a street sign

an impatient woman drags a short fat dog

faster than his legs can keep up

trailing both is the gray-haired matriarch

speaking into the gap of space

the daughter leaves unanswered

on the second floor

a man watches a movie on his computer

his back to the open window

shadows and light on the screen

but I can’t make out anything else

an old woman waits while her husband descends the parking ramp

she and I exchange glances

then smiles

alas her husband walks up the ramp

the two wait a bit longer for the garage door to close

before she links her arm through his

they walk to the corner and turn left

we vanish from each other’s view.

Of course, no one vanishes.

The dog and the lovers

the old couple and the guy on the 2nd floor

the mother and her impatient daughter

the girl who twirled

even the street sign

sofa

the contents of the trash bins.

And yes, the foreigner

fingering coins

heavy and unfamiliar

in my pocket

no matter which one

I pull out

it won’t pay the price –

solitude

awkwardness

invisibility –

the traveler’s holy trinity.

I have lived each of these tiny tableaux.

I have been the one watching a movie

the twirling girl

the whiny child

the scolding parent

the impatient daughter

the one talking into unanswered gaps

the young lover immersed in a sidewalk kiss

the old woman taking her husband’s arm

the one pulled faster than I can keep up

the one discarded and upended.

Some watch

for the thrill of something different

an illicit jolt

the aliveness of potentially being caught.

I watch,

find my way home.

Posted in Connection, Travel | 2 Comments

2 Responses

  1. on December 8, 2019 at 9:56 pm Harold

    This echoes one or two of your poems from Guanajuato. Like this one a lot. And I love the line “Of course no one vanishes”


  2. on December 8, 2019 at 9:58 pm Harold

    And these two poems from Sevilla seem much more introspective??



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