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Absence has its own feel

October 5, 2023 by BHW

Fog obscures, thick drab shawl over the shoulders

of the pines, blurs the silhouettes, redacts the hills

on the horizon, their stacks of structures, street

lights, every human feat of engineering reduced

to noises, sources unseen, motors revving, tires rolling

over pavement, rushing river of modernity

moving, the frenzied scurrying of an ant hill dispersing.

Mournfulness surges as the sun creeps higher, warms

this restless array, pulls back the shawl, reveals forms

and movement, single yellow school bus traveling northbound

across the bridge, the briefcase-d father opening the back door

for his backpack-ed daughter, their singular black car reversing

down the driveway, turning right, estuary to stream to river

single crow on the lone branch atop the highest conifer, cawing

head lowered as if in prayer

unanswered.

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